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I first saw her across the cafeteria
Like a typical loner, she sat in perfect solitude
                                        trying to guess at the mounds on her plate.
When she finally did take a bite, she seemed to like it a little more  
     than the other piles
And so continued to nibble at it cautiously.

No one approached her, but she didn’t seem stranger to the concept
She merely kept her eyes to herself,
               Occasionally peering over to read an open book by her tray.
Her black shoulder bag lay in the seat beside her,
                                                    Guaranteeing some type of safety.
Limited though it was, she seemed to take some kind of comfort in it.
When a pair of loud-talking jocks walked up to the table,
I saw her sink ever so slightly.

The book was holding her complete attention now…

When the jocks had run out of  sarcastic quips and comments, They left and I saw her straighten in her chair.
She held her responses inside and returned to her book
Just as they walked by my table.

I wanted to say something, but kept my mouth shut.
The last time I’d confronted one of their kind was enough for me,  
                                                                                     thank you.

                                            Yet…

She didn’t seem sad, but her eyes had a haunting quality to them-
                                  Hauntingly familiar.
It reminded me of that feeling you get when you know you’ve seen the face somewhere before,
                                  But can’t remember where.

I continued to eat my own food, looking up into the doorway occasionally to see if a friend would chance to stroll through the door.

But for the most part, my book held my attention.

As for the girl, she got up to leave the same time I did.
   When I got to the dish line, I looked across the cafeteria again only to notice the huge mirror that covered the back wall.

Odd…
          I don’t remember them installing a mirror there.
©2005-2009 ~alex-sukehiro
:iconalex-sukehiro:

Author's Comments

Something I thought up in the cafeteria yesterday--go figure. :D
I wrote it up (the intro anyhow) when I got back to my dorm.

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:iconinfernal-raynata:
wow thats goos and i love the twist to it!!! it rocks

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Meow =^_^=

My poetry group- [link]

[link] I found this cool site, take a look :D
:iconnnovgorod4l:
Hey you know what thats like a story I had read a while back, with a twist. NICE JOB! :+fav:!
:iconsyzzlechicka1013:
LOVE the ending. Love the piece, lol. The narrative of the girl / yourself is wonderful...

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we're all chior boys at best.
:iconalex-sukehiro:
Ah, thankies. :3 It's odd what cafeteria food inspires....No seriously...:rofl:

--
"If quitters never win, and winners never quit, then who is the idiot that said, 'Quit while you're ahead'?"

"Isn't Chicago a state?"
~Kyoko-Maxwell :D
:iconalex-sukehiro:
Thank you, thank you, thank you very much :bow: I'm here all week :giggle:

just kidding. :D

but seriously, thank you for the fave :D i feel all special LOL

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"If quitters never win, and winners never quit, then who is the idiot that said, 'Quit while you're ahead'?"

"Isn't Chicago a state?"
~Kyoko-Maxwell :D
:iconalex-sukehiro:
Thankies. :D as I said, it's odd what cafeteria food inspires :o
Maybe I should be scared now...O_O LOL!!!

--
"If quitters never win, and winners never quit, then who is the idiot that said, 'Quit while you're ahead'?"

"Isn't Chicago a state?"
~Kyoko-Maxwell :D
:iconnnovgorod4l:
haha no problem it was a great read keep this kind of stuff up PLEASE! hehe!
:iconalex-sukehiro:
O.O um...okay ^^

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"If quitters never win, and winners never quit, then who is the idiot that said, 'Quit while you're ahead'?"

"Isn't Chicago a state?"
~Kyoko-Maxwell :D
:iconblackraven23:
yeahh! it rocks!!! ^_^ hehe.. thats so cool!! ~.^ reminds me of myself alot of the time... *grinswickedly*

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i walk alone
i walk this empty street on the blvd. of broken dreams
where the city sleeps
and im the only one and i walk alone
my shadows the only one that walks beside me
i walk alone i walk alone i walk alone

:meditate:

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